CGMA 2012 Semester 1 week 2

Feeling the affect of lack of experience pretty hardcore right now.  I have ideas and I have problems putting them down on paper.  I also seem to have issues trying to do mid-shots and close ups.  I know the general camera angles and stuff, but for some reason I just lean toward the deep shots. 

I really feel like this week's assignment could use a lot more rework or something...

Fundamentals: